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One night, Kim sat in her
favorite chair reading the latest romance novel when she heard a noise from
inside the house. That's weird, she thought. Shaking her head, she went back to
reading her book. A few minutes later, she heard the noise again but this time
from a different part of the house. Okay, now this is freaking me out. I don't
have a dog or cat. No one lives here but me and I know that I locked all the
windows and doors. Plus, with it not raining outside, the sound was a little
eerie. Shrugging it off she went back to her book.
Perched on the sideboard in the
dining room was figurine of an angel. This was no ordinary angel. This angel
could move from room to room without the actual figurine moving from its perch.
I always thought that some of grandmother's figurine's looked at me when I
moved around the house. It gave me the creeps. The whole house was creepy. I
inherited the house when her grandmother passed away last year. I swear, if I
hadn't needed a place to live, I wouldn't have moved in here. Just then,
another sound and it came from the kitchen. Okay, I'm going to bed. I can't
concentrate on my book with my "ghost" buddy moving around in the
house. Leaving the lights on, I fixed the coffee pot for in the morning and
walked upstairs to bed.
I've got to learn to keep my
wings intact and in my back? Tony wanted Kim to notice him but he was going
about it the wrong way. Wings retracted, I surveyed the house. She left the
lights on again. How in the world can I get Kim to notice me? Does she not realize
that I'm her guardian angel and that I can sense danger coming to harm her?
Tony crept upstairs and watched Kim sleep. She was beautiful with creamy white
skin, golden brown hair and the most kissable lips. Kim needs to believe in her
"ghost" because if she didn't, it could be deadly for both of them.
Tony placed a feather light kiss on Kim's forehead and headed downstairs again.
Kim awoke with the weirdest
sensation. She felt like someone was in her bedroom and that she was kissed on
the forehead. Okay, no more late night ice cream binges and definitely no
caffeine. Lying back down in bed, she thought that even though she was still
creped out by the noises, the kiss felt too real. I'm delusional, I am.
Shivering, she pulled the duvet closer to her neck and within an instant she
was asleep again.
Whew, that was a close one
thought Tony. I need to show myself to Kim but she won't believe me. She
doesn't believe in angels, ghosts-anything paranormal. She wants the fairytale,
not the fantasy world. Well, Kim will find out soon enough how real I am. By
tomorrow night, if she won't believe in angels and what I can do, she'll be
dead.
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Well Tony I want the fairytale and the fantasy :=D Thank you for the fun participation in this hop! Today I am choosing angels.
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